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Rainbow Brain — Mon, 18 Dec 2006 15:59:44 -0500

markandeya wrote:

War is surely a human flaw - or something not necessary once we reach our oneness. i am having fun and difficulty with the idea as i keep seeing animals and insects etc. attacking each other and fighting for territory, resources etc. So i don't know and am looking at if this is a human flaw only or something we have carried with us from lower species.

There is no war or fear in the nature of creation, that man seeks and sees his own fears in the nature which has given him lesson upon lesson so freely, is the action of his denial to accept the reality that nature is a cooperative entity acting within the respect of her truth toward all.

Accept the truth of your own species as the youngest and therefore the lowest evolved group of experience on the planet and perhaps these facts will become clear within the poetic rhythm of living and dying for the greater good.

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A Blossom in Silence - powerfully sweet

markandeya — Mon, 18 Dec 2006 08:57:42 -0500

Destiny reveals what winter could not steal:
there is a higher , deeper destiny of our souls which is beyond the limits of human nature, human mind, that is not limited by time or space. Our souls create it and it must work itself out eventually. Thus the winter of our separation with the Divine or with our separation of the outer conscious with the inner soul - the oneness- can not steal that destiny of ours to be one again. I like the effect/feeling of an awesome silence and it makes a powerful statement of the dynamism of the silence and the blossoming. The line stands by itself and so separates the past of revelation to the newer past of god speaking to you.
AS if wisdom were free for all. Very nice. It is so true that the "as if" punctuates it with emphasis. Yet it also expresses that in those special times of Spring, like blossomings,
wisdom comes in bountious helpings , in floods sometimes. I like it also because wisdom is different than knowledge.
It was there that god spoke to me - I like that in that wisdom, blossoming, awesome silence, there at that time and consciousness god came to speak to you. It is so much the real and norm and true experience of many.
I like the turn of how love was "Her" only identity. Here we might capitalize Love. Maybe to differentiate a more divine Love from a more usual human love.
I like the feel of Love being the only identity but i take it poetically not philosophically. Love being the basis and unity of the Divine. Yet the Divine has innumerable identitites, but
they are only partial masks. But all is the Divine. Then one can say all is love deep down only perverted or converted by our nature.
War is surely a human flaw - or something not necessary once we reach our oneness. i am having fun and difficulty with the idea as i keep seeing animals and insects etc. attacking each other and fighting for territory, resources etc. So i don't know and am looking at if this is a human flaw only or something we have carried with us from lower species.
But the effect of the poem is quite nice and i think it will make people feel good and give hope. It has a more mature rhyme scheme or should i say does not need the simple close
together quick rhymes to keep it moving and flowing and the rhythm works nicely even with different sized lines with different beats. ALso identity reminds of an earlier destiny and entity yet subtly. Also flaw reminds of the Awe in awesome but doesn't make it loud or pushy. Just a gentle remembrance that soothes but does not take away from the image. Very Very nice. All the best.

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LittleNote — Mon, 11 Dec 2006 00:32:08 -0500

AWESOME! TRULY BEAUTIFUL AND TRUE AND AGAIN, AWESOME!
THANK YOU
Just-a-LittleNote

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silent lotus — Fri, 08 Dec 2006 17:14:29 -0500

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