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FUNDAMENTALISM
I had a brainstorm on the way home today concerning taking back our language versus framing. It's about the word I used as the title of this entry. It's a scary word to progressives; it brings to mind fire-and-brimstone religious views and reactionary politics.
I want this word back. This is exactly the word that I need to summarize what I mean by Get Back to Basics. When talking about religion, fundamentalists are disrespectfully known as "Bible thumpers" because they wish to revert to their original source - a book. Well, I'm a Constitution thumper. That means that when talking about politics, I am a fundamentalist because I wish to revert to my original source - a document.
I think this nation has gone so far to the right that those who are actually in the political center are considered radical. I believe the political center of this nation is most accurately defined by the Constitution. I propose that the left be left (!) to the radicals. I also maintain that a "progressive" is a person who believes in progress, and therefore the term "progressive" does not denote a position on the political spectrum at all, even though the connotation in the current political climate is that a progressive is a leftist.
I propose that we restore dignity to the political center by developing our list of values from those expressed in the Constitution (as amended). This approach is used in Article I (Findings) in the DoP Bill. In doing so, we will become fundamentalists in the true sense of the word. So far, I am a Constitutional Fundamentalist. However, after careful reading, we may find that we hold values not listed in the Constitution. That's okay; we can add them to the list and mature into Progressive Fundamentalists.
I want my language back. I want my country back. I believe most people today don't even know that their rights are being violated because they are ignorant of the rights GUARANTEED to them by the Constitution - the document that, as amended over the years, expresses the true mandate of our government. I know I could use some review of just what that mandate is and what rights are guaranteed to us.
The connection between rights and values should be clear. I'm not sure I completely understand Lakoff's distinction between concepts/ideas and values, but from what I do understand, it is clear to me that the values must be primary since votes are cast with respect to values. I'm not entirely convinced that Lakoff's distinction is necessary to the development of progressive rhetoric. Let our positively-framed progressive rhetoric spring up like a brainstorm and spread like wildfire. (My apologies to Southern California for the imagery.) "If you build it, they will come."
In other words, it doesn't take a deep understanding of Lakoff's esoteric theory - interesting as it is to those of us who understand it - to define a list of values and find ways to express them that resonate with our core. For example, I'm still using "...address the propeace agenda." I don't know how the framing of that phrase would stand up to Lakoff's analysis, but I do know that people pay attention! The only value expressed there is the basic one for our campaign - peace - and that is a calm value. It is the strong, active verb (address) and the powerful noun (agenda) that draw attention to the benign value word that's hidden in the adjective.
I'll close with another simple, well-known, traditional rhetorical ploy (new euphemism for propaganda) with very little theoretical baggage: repetition. That's what I mean by "take back our language" - one word at a time if necessary. That's what I mean by Get Back to Basics. That's what I mean by Progressive Fundamentalism.
"Blue in a Red State"
PROPAGANDA
I am closely studying my dictionary, and Lakoff is mistaken about the meaning of the word "propaganda." Propaganda is the means used to spread an idea; it is not inherently false and known to be false as he states - in fact, it does not even need to be an assertion capable of truth value. I agree with him when he recommends against deceptive framing, but the spreading of propaganda - positive propeace propaganda - is an essential strategy.
The word is derived from the same root as the verb "to propagate," and was first used by Pope Gregory XV whose Congregatio de propaganda fide (Congregation for Propagating the Faith) was given jurisdiction over missionary activities. Veracity of propaganda is not an issue in matters of faith, but we can make it an issue in our own propeace propaganda. According to the dictionary, propaganda can consist of "information, facts, ideas, rumors, actions, or allegations that are spread to further one's cause or to damage an opposing cause."
I appreciate Lakoff's attempts to reframe some of the damaging propaganda coming from the right, but I would urge two cautions. First, we must be cautious about propagating (!) confusion about the meaning of words. Second, I would urge simplicity in our attempts to reach the "average" American. The problem with Lakoff's framing model is its complexity. In developing propeace propaganda (okay, then - rhetoric), our motto should be "Back to Basics."
"Blue in a Red State"
Lakoff's definition
Your definition of spin fits with Lakoff's. Lakoff says in his book "Don't Think of an Elephant":
"Spin is the manipulative use of a frame. Spin is used when something embarrassing has happened or has been said, and it's an attempt to put an innocent frame on it -- that is, to make the embarrassing occurrence sound normal or good."
He separates this from propaganda as follows:
"Propaganda is another manipulative use of framing. Propaganda is an attempt to get the public to adopt a frame that is not true and is known not to be true, for the purpose of gaining or maintaining political control."
The title of this thread is an oxymoron by that definition. Lakoff continues:
"The reframing I am suggesting is neither spin nor propaganda. Progressives need to learn to communicate using frames that they really believe, frames that express what their moral views really are. I strongly recommend against any deceptive framing. I think it is not just morally reprehensible, but also impractical, because deceptive framing usually backfires sooner or later."
You are right, we need to call out and reframe these abuses whenever they occur. Let the backfiring begin!
SPIN
... is a way of twisting words so that concepts with negative value end up sounding positive. It is important to reframe these "concepts" and show them for what they really are. The following information is from an article by Molly Ivins posted 5/4 at AlterNet.
"Progressive indexing" is "cutting Social Security benefits."
"Extraordinary rendition" now means "shipping the guy to another country so he can be tortured"
The first example is dangerous because it contains the word "progressive," which already has quite another meaning in the political arena. Ivins's reframing is good here because it is rich with value-laden words.
Now consider the second example. The spin is even more amazing and effective because the expression "extraordinary rendition" has a very positive connotation in the arts. However, in Ivins's reframing, I think the negativity and sarcasm only detract from our understanding of the gravity of the situation. Furthermore, notice how the passive voice begs the question: "tortured by whom?" This serves to muddy the issue because the torturer is not necessarily the one accountable for the atrocity. How about "extradition to evade the injunction against cruel and unusual punishment?" This is a more powerful reframing because it reminds us of a value - the guarantee of protection to prisoners. Also notice how we can clearly place accountability for the atrocity on the one(s) performing the extraditing and the evading without actually stooping to the level of pointing our finger.
FRAMING
Here are some notes about the information from Jason’s blog entry on the workshop with Lakoff concerning framing.
Definitions:
Framing - using short phrases to evoke ideas and connect to values. (I would add that the vocabulary should be simple without sacrificing depth. This is difficult, but remember that we only rank 49th in the world in literacy.)
Core Values - empathy, responsibility, strength, protection, fairness, fulfillment, freedom, opportunity, prosperity, community, service, cooperation, trust, honesty, and open communication. (Given the examples below, this list is not exhaustive – but it’s a start!)
Examples:
How do we use framing to counter the far right’s rhetoric on “tax relief?†Concept: tax base. Value: prosperity. Frame: “prosperous tax base.†Critique: The Concept is long-standing and clearly understood. The Value is well documented.
Concept: terrorism. Values: compassion, community. Frame: “Don’t forsake compassion and community in developing a balanced response to acts of desperation.†Critique: On the positive side, I was glad to see the word “compassion†used instead of “empathy†since the latter has paranormal connotations. However, it is too long, and it starts with a negative while we are trying to evolve from anti- to pro-. “Balanced response†is too abstract; it smacks of intellectualism as much as the phrase “organizing principle†that appears in the DoP bill itself. Positive Progressive Propaganda: “Foster compassion and build community to defeat terrorism.†The ideas can be rearranged: “To defeat terrorism, foster compassion and build community.†This can be shortened further into a bumper sticker: “Defeat terrorism: Foster compassion, build community.â€Â
Concept: privacy. Value: dignity (not on the Core list above). Frame: “Privacy is essential for preserving human dignity.†Critique: I would give this one second prize in spite of the weak verb. “To preserve†is such a fine strong verb; use it as such. The word “human†is extraneous and the statement violates the brevity principle with its awkward construction. Things start to get fuzzy here, too. Is privacy a Concept or a Value? Positive Progressive Propaganda: “Privacy preserves dignity,†or “Dignity requires privacy.â€Â
Concept: environment. Value: safety (not on the Core list above; maybe we can subsume this one under "protection"). I’d like to add “children†to the list of Core Values, but only if we also add “elders†and “parents†and …. What I’m really saying is what I’ve said before: We must take back our language! We are talking about “family†here, but somehow we’ve conceded the term “family values†to the far right. Frame: “We are in a unique position as humans to provide a safe and clean future for our children.†Critique: This one gets the booby prize! “Unique†is a sorely tired and often inappropriately used word – like here, for example. What is unique about our position as humans is that we are the only species that can consciously and swiftly manipulate environments, and therefore change entire ecosystems. That whole phrase addresses neither the Concept nor the Value(s) and is responsible for the gross violation of the brevity principle. Furthermore, the juxtaposition of “future†and “children†is semantically empty. Would we provide a future for our ancestors? I realize that politicians have found much kudos in kissing babies, so it’s probably a good idea to keep the word “children.†But why not use the word “environment†instead of “future?†That names the Concept clearly, while “a safe and clean future†could mean an expensive modern house with a good alarm system. I would add clarity as a criterion for successful framing. Positive Progressive Propaganda: “Our children deserve a safe and clean environment.â€Â
Concept: cause and effect? Values: knowledge (not on the Core list above), open communication. Frame: “My knowledge is a direct result of the freedom of expression of others.†Critique: Is knowledge a Concept or a Value? Despite the fuzziness and the weak verb, this frame gets first prize. The beauty of this piece of rhetoric is the way it illustrates another value that’s missing from the Core list above: reciprocity. I love the way it starts and ends with opposite pronouns. Positive Progressive Propaganda: “My knowledge comes from the freedom of expression of others,†or if we sacrifice that wonderful pronoun placement for a stronger verb, “The freedom of expression of others feeds my knowledge.â€Â
Concept: information. Values: strength, open communication. Frame: “Strength through an informed public.†Critique: The Concept is not clearly tied to the Value, possibly because this is the only frame that is not a complete sentence. Perhaps in this example brevity is taken too far. I’m not sure what to think about the relationship between open communication, a Core Value, and an informed public. The former looks like freedom to me, and the latter more like authoritarianism. Or, I might be misunderstanding completely. Maybe the Concept is supposed to be “the public†and “information†is being used as a synonym for “knowledge†and this has nothing to do with open communication after all. It’s not a bad bumper sticker, though. Positive Progressive Propaganda: “An informed public strengthens our nation.â€Â
Suggestions from my own experience and training:
Use as many strong transitive verbs in the active voice as possible. The first can be accomplished most easily by avoiding forms of the verb “to be†as a main verb. The best legitimate use of this verb is for purposes of definition, like an equal sign. Obviously, its occasional use as an auxiliary is necessary. To accomplish effective use of the active voice, we must unlearn the lessons we were taught in grade school about avoiding all but the third person. This restriction is only appropriate in writing scholarly essays or for scientific journals and is anathema to effective speaking. Please go back to the examples of Positive Progressive Propaganda and notice the strong verbs.
Don’t be shy about using words with negative connotations if they have been frequently used recently, like “terrorism.†There is a phenomenon called “semantic satiation†that causes “acts of desperation†to sound even scarier! To fully understand this phenomenon in its extreme form, take a clearly concrete noun like “butter†and say it about 40 times in a row. By the time you finish, the word will have no meaning.
I "get it," but I'm not sure this model is of much use to the politician in a debate setting because it is too complex. I still think we'd be better served by a simple collection of catchy phrases, buzz words, and irrefutable positions so that it would be easier for our candidates to "think on their feet" instead of having to rely entirely on speech writers, cue cards, etc. There is value in spontaneity.
I'm also unclear exactly what is meant by a Core Value. My confusion stems from the things I think of as Values that actually came up in the examples but were absent from the list. Another confusing thing is that it was often difficult to determine what was a Value and what was a Concept. My favorite examples here are knowledge and community.
I have already added simplicity and clarity to Lakoff's requirements for brevity, evocativity, and connection. One further consideration is rhythm, and that has a lot to do with avoiding complex syntax. Grammatical complexity causes cracking, warping, distorting, or even shattering of the frame, an uncomfortable tongue-tied feeling for the speaker, an impression of intellectual snobbishness on the part of the audience, and difficulty following a sentence from its beginning to its end resulting in an experience of frustration and lack of comprehension by the audience. Rhythm, on the other hand, introduces symmetry and style while facilitating delivery by the speaker and comprehension by the audience. Perhaps it would be a good idea for our candidates to study with rap artists. (My tongue is only halfway into my cheek with that suggestion!)
Disclaimer: I have not yet read Lakoff’s book, although I did read an interview with him about it. I did not attend the workshop, either.
(But I "get it.")
DoP SUMMARY
After reading the Bill to create the DoP, I found that none of the existing information pieces did an adequate job of describing the purpose of the DoP. I think the statement below is an effective synthesis of some of the existing descriptions with clarification of the international issues. I used this for my press release for the Mother's Day activity. Notice the use of strong verbs, the balance between domestic and international concerns, and of course the presence of my favorite phrase: "propeace agenda." Please feel free to borrow it liberally; I think it's good rhetoric.
Domestically, the Department will streamline and consolidate the efforts of existing agencies that address the propeace agenda. The Department will be responsible for developing new policies and implementing field-tested techniques to reduce school violence, domestic abuse (child, spousal, elder), gang violence, and hate crimes. The international agenda of the Department will be to research and analyze foreign policy and make recommendations to the President on how to address the root causes of war. In addition, the Department will work to defuse tension in areas of conflict, de-escalate hostilities in war zones, and facilitate recovery in post-war areas.
JULIA WARD HOWE
After reading the 1870 proclamation in full, I didn't find that any of the summaries or excerpts quite captured the substance without sacrificing the flavor of her words. Here is my version, including updated punctuation:
"…Say firmly: ‘We will not have great questions answered by irrelevant agencies; our husbands will not come to us reeking with carnage for caresses and applause. Our sons shall not be taken from us to unlearn all that we have been able to teach them of charity, mercy, and patience….’ From … a devastated Earth a voice goes up…. It says: ‘Disarm! Disarm! The sword of murder is not the balance of justice.’ Blood does not wipe out dishonor, nor violence indicate possession…. Let women … bewail and commemorate the dead [and] take counsel with each other as to the means whereby the great human family can live in peace…. In the name of womanhood and humanity, I earnestly ask … that a general congress … may be appointed … to promote the alliance of the different nationalities, the amicable settlement of international questions, [and] the great and general interests of peace."
RHETORIC
... is a euphemism for propaganda. That is why I suggested changing the name of this forum. I've been doing a lot of reading lately that supports my view that the reason Dubya and Company have been so successful is that our rhetoric s&%#s and theirs doesn't. We need some catchy phrases to repeat over and over, like "family values." I've been responding to that one with "ALL FAMILIES have family values." We need some positions on issues that nobody can refute, like "support the troops." I've been getting a lot of mileage out of "promote the propeace agenda." "Agenda" is a powerful word. Corporate Board meetings have agendas. Anyone else with catchy rhetoric should please share it here. Just as I originated this anthem discussion as an attempt to take back our country, I've been on a campaign to take back our language. I'm eager to hear more about "Don't Think of an Elephant;" this forum would be a good place for some feedback on the idea of "framing."
Speaking of rhetoric and framing and taking things back, we started this forum because somebody thought the national anthem was not well enough known. I suggest that it's the Constitution (with its Amendments and Bill of Rights) that's not well enough known. While we're taking things back that we somehow let go or lost, let's see if we can take back our Constitution. I implore other teachers, especially social studies teachers, to prepare in-depth lesson plans on that document and use it as a source of rhetoric. All of this is entirely consistent with and supportive of and essential to the DoP bill. I've actually read it carefully three times now, and while the legalese does not make entertaining reading, I highly recommend careful study of the "findings" at the beginning of the bill.
The "Purple America" concept should be utilized in this campaign far more than it has been; that would be a very strong tool in bringing the "new silent majority" (not bad!) out of their apathy, fear, and denial. Purple America was a new concept even to The Peace Alliance. Our people need to know that they are not alone. Our people need to know that if they speak out, they will be heard. Our people need to know that they have already been heard by politicians with power like Dennis Kucinich and the 50+ Representatives on that bill.
I read an article today ("In Praise of Prosperity" by Joshua Holland, AlterNet, 4/25/05) that used the word "prosperity" in a very positive way, as in "live long and prosper," as in having everyone's needs (as opposed to wants) met. I bring that up here because behind the creation of the DoP lies reduced military spending, and since peace costs so much less than war, there will be money for environmental action, scientific research, social programs (education, health care, retirement benefits, human rights), development of a sustainable means of transportation, and maybe even promotion of the arts - all those things that can make our nation prosperous in Holland's sense.
PLEDGE OF ALLEGIANCE
Far be it from me to suggest a problem without proposing a solution. I think I've come up with a Pledge that everyone can live with. It goes beyond the FLAG and the REPUBLIC (which word I've replaced with "nation," since I'm not sure I understand the connotations of the R word) to include the rights and responsibilities of citizens. Even though it's a bit longer than the current version, I think that breaking it into three sentences makes it simpler to understand and learn - even for children and immigrants. The beauty of the wording of that third sentence is that it even promises that US citizens living or working elsewhere will abide by the laws of their host countries while at the same time giving a head-nod to states' rights. What do you think?
"I pledge allegiance to the United States of America. I pledge respect for the ceremonies that honor this nation’s flag. I pledge to uphold and protect its Constitution and Amendments, including the Bill of Rights, and any other Laws that pertain to the place I call home."
A WELCOME REVISION
"All" is a good word, but it doesn't work in the second verse, and there's still the problem of the male pronoun. In the first and third verses, I suggest using the passive voice to avoid the pronoun entirely: "All grace be shed on thee." In the second verse, the word "Please" might be a simple substitution. The other thing I will do, the next time I print it, is replace some of the exclamation points with periods. It seems a small thing, but the fire-and-brimstone extremists tend to favor lots of exclamation points, and I think the only ones that really belong in the song are the ones each time the word "America!" is used, where emphasis is actually intended.
I am glad to learn of the uproar about the Pledge to the Flag; that could be a whole separate forum. The God issue aside, it is semantically inaccurate to pledge allegiance to a flag. If you check the dictionary, allegiance may be pledged to "a person, group, or cause, esp. a government" but not to a symbol. The sentence (and it IS all one sentence) betrays its ignorance with the word "and," so that we are pledging allegiance to a flag AND a republic. The sentence ends with four descriptors, all of which are debatable. The only things we should be PLEDGING to our FLAG is to take it down when it rains, fold it properly, replace it when it becomes faded or tattered, and other such marks of RESPECT as are already written down somewhere (probably in a military document), not ALLEGIANCE. Pledging ALLEGIANCE to a flag promotes jingoism.
beware of God
A good adaptation. Makes the song a bit more palatable. But to use it as a national anthem we will have to find a way to get rid of the mention of God otherwise the ACLU and others will have a fit. Look that the uproar that is going on over the Pledge of Allegiance because of "one nation under God". Simple suggestion would be to replace with the word "All". What do you think?
America the Beautiful
After reading these lyrics, I was disturbed by some of the verses that are repetitious, others that are war-oriented, and still others that seem racist. However, it is still a beautiful melody. Below is my modified version, which I think would do nicely for a national anthem. By combining every two lines, I can get Bates's statement along with the three verses and refrain on one page to be used as a handout.
America the Beautiful
By Katharine Lee Bates, 1913
Adapted by Susan Livingston, 2005
O beautiful for spacious skies, for amber waves of grain,
For purple mountain majesties above the fruited plain!
America! America! God shed his grace on thee
And crown thy good with brotherhood from sea to shining sea!
O beautiful for pilgrim feet whose stern, impassioned stress
A thoroughfare for freedom beat across the wilderness!
America! America! God mend thine every flaw,
Confirm thy soul in self-control, thy liberty in law!
O beautiful for patriot dream that sees beyond the years
Thine alabaster cities gleam undimmed by human tears!
America! America! God shed his grace on thee
Till selfish gain no longer stain the banner of the free!
America! America! God shed his grace on thee
And crown thy good with brotherhood from sea to shining sea!
"Blue in a Red State"
Purple America
How's this for a patriotic song? The tune should be obvious.
Purple America
Purple America, land that I love -
Stand beside her, and guide her
Through the night with a light from above.
From the mountains to the prairies
To the oceans white with foam
Purple America, my home sweet home.
Purple America, my home sweet home.
"Blue in a Red State"
lyrics
I don't know about the project or how to influence the outcome, but I did find the lyrics of the song (see below). It would make a nice national anthem...
America The Beautiful
Katharine Lee Bates wrote the original version in 1893. She wrote the 2nd version in 1904. Her final version was written in 1913.
Here is a note from Katharine Lee Bates:
"One day some of the other teachers and I decided to go on a trip to 14,000-foot Pikes Peak. We hired a prairie wagon. Near the top we had to leave the wagon and go the rest of the way on mules. I was very tired. But when I saw the view, I felt great joy. All the wonder of America seemed displayed there, with the sea-like expanse."
America the Beautiful - 1913
O beautiful for spacious skies,
For amber waves of grain,
For purple mountain majesties
Above the fruited plain!
America! America!
God shed his grace on thee
And crown thy good with brotherhood
From sea to shining sea!
O beautiful for pilgrim feet
Whose stern, impassioned stress
A thoroughfare for freedom beat
Across the wilderness!
America! America!
God mend thine every flaw,
Confirm thy soul in self-control,
Thy liberty in law!
O beautiful for heroes proved In liberating strife.
Who more than self the country loved
And mercy more than life!
America! America!
May God thy gold refine
Till all success be nobleness
And every gain divine!
O beautiful for patriot dream
That sees beyond the years
Thine alabaster cities gleam
Undimmed by human tears!
America! America!
God shed his grace on thee
And crown thy good with brotherhood
From sea to shining sea!
O beautiful for halcyon skies,
For amber waves of grain,
For purple mountain majesties
Above the enameled plain!
America! America!
God shed his grace on thee
Till souls wax fair as earth and air
And music-hearted sea!
O beautiful for pilgrims feet,
Whose stern impassioned stress
A thoroughfare for freedom beat
Across the wilderness!
America ! America !
God shed his grace on thee
Till paths be wrought through
wilds of thought
By pilgrim foot and knee!
O beautiful for glory-tale
Of liberating strife
When once and twice,
for man's avail
Men lavished precious life !
America! America!
God shed his grace on thee
Till selfish gain no longer stain
The banner of the free!
O beautiful for patriot dream
That sees beyond the years
Thine alabaster cities gleam
Undimmed by human tears!
America! America!
God shed his grace on thee
Till nobler men keep once again
Thy whiter jubilee!